IELTS Writing Task 2: Sample Essays (with score and comments)
Below are two sample essays, each with scores and critiques from an actual IELTS examiner. Question: Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any other experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence? (Word requirement: 250 words) Essay 1 Everyone is a unique being on the world. It’s not only because how we look but also our personality is different from the others. As the same time, personality is also the most important element to form a person. There was…
