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Original (unedited):
Crisis often refers to events of extreme significance, the crisis decision making predicts responses to events of all level of severity. Disasters or crises are simply negative events that draw persons’ attention. Disasters or crises will cause more severe consequences than other events. How to make the decision when confronting negative events may require considerable attention at all the time.
Original (with edits):
The term “crisis”Crisis often refers to events of extreme significance,, and the crisis decision making involves predicting and responding to predicts responses to events of all level of severity. Disasters or crises are, at their core, simply negative events that draw persons’ople’s attention. Disasters or crises will cause more severe consequences than other events. Making decisions when How to make the decision when confronting negative events may require considerable and constant attention at all the time.
Final version:
The term “crisis” often refers to events of extreme significance, and crisis decision making involves predicting and responding to events of all level of severity. Disasters or crises are, at their core, simply negative events that draw people’s attention. Disasters or crises will cause more severe consequences than other events. Making decisions when confronting negative events may require considerable and constant attention.
Original:
Crisis often refers to events of extreme significance,, and the crisis decision making involves predicting and responding to predicts responses to events of all level of severity. Disasters or crises are, at their core, simply negative events that draw persons’ople’s attention. Disasters or crises will cause more severe consequences than other events. Making decisions when How to make the decision when confronting negative events may require considerable and constant attention at all the time.
Edited:
The term “crisis” often refers to events of extreme significance, and crisis decision making involves predicting and responding to events of all level of severity. Disasters or crises are, at their core, simply negative events that draw people’s attention. Disasters or crises will cause more severe consequences than other events. Making decisions when confronting negative events may require considerable and constant attention.
